I have submitted my first proposal for your logo, so any feedback will be welcoming.

Best Regards,
Black Graphic

Hi, please give your feedback on my submissions, feel free to suggest any changes or modifications.

Thank you!

feedback please. thanks

Hello. Dear project owner.
could you provide us any feedback please? If you have any questions please let us know.
Thank you.

Good Day Project Owner! I would like to request for a feedback regarding my logo submission. Any feedback that could help us improve our design will be highly appreciated. Thanks! Have a great day! :)