Feedback please.

Hello, This is my different approach on #11996494 and Let me know your favor to this. Thanks.

Hello sir !


Submitted some awsome designs , i'm 100% that you'll like !

Please take a look and read the description i left .

Feedback would be very much appriciated .

Thank you !

how can i improve this design ? please help ? this is going to be your brand so i want to improve

Thank you so much for the generous rating of design #12026828 .

Would love it if you'd wrote something along to improve my design .

Hi,

Thank you for your very good ratings on my designs.

Would like to know if I'm in the right direction or if it's on the top choices.

Thank you so much!

Best regards,
R

Hello,

Any updates on this project?

Thanks,
R