Any feedback on my design? Thanks.

I want the design to look more like yarn twisting up in the shape of a tree. The "tree" is the shape, made up of twisted yarn strands unfurling at the top. I have added picture to my brief to explain this better. My products are going to consist of twisted yarns of different textures, sizes, and shapes,

Kindly check the updated design. Thanks.

Hi there,
feedback please.