feedback please on my designs.. thank you.

The Design King - We sent you a private message regarding your designs. Your concepts are a little too basic for what we're looking for. We would like to incorporate the Finger Lakes into the logo somehow. Can you also use more color?

i uploaded a 2nd design with the finger lakes in the design, also i felt both designs were less basic than the renders/examples that you uploaded.. as i felt those were very basic designs...

Designers - The brief had been updated for a more clear and detailed idea of what we are looking for.

I hope you like it, give me your feedback please. Thanks :)

Feedback please. Thanks.

Hi thanks for the feedback Hope you find great design better than mine. . Cheers !

Feedback please, thank you. :)

all those revisions for nothing, go figure....