Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions . Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply.

Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design.

This design has some potential, we want a logo that has to be on all merchandise and equipment (like a stamp/badge)
The prime wording we want is "Short Rink" Super 10s will be a bye product.

This design has some potential, we want a logo that has to be on all merchandise and equipment (like a stamp/badge)
The prime wording we want is "Short Rink" Super 10s will be a bye product.