feedback please.

feedback please ,design #19400047 and #19400048 ,regards

Lacks the complexity and dimension that we are looking for.

Interesting spin on the glass, The Liquid levels remind me a lot of the Pepsi logo. I would like to see a more emphasis on the pen.

thanks a lot sir,
please give me feedback on my design, i hope it helps me to give you proper revision, regards

please check design #19404808 , #19404809 ,regards

waiting for your valuable feedback.

Please Feedback ! (#19454222) (#19454221)

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

What does T.A.O.S.T. mean or represent?