feedback please.

sir kindly give your precious feedback please.

Feedback please

Hi, about my submit design (#19777082), let me know, if you want me to revise anything. thanks.

Thank you all for an amazing effort. Our Client was blown away with the quality and creativity of the submissions. He has selected a Finalist which was not much of a departure from his original logo. Thank you again. Best wishes!

Actually it's the same logo place on some mockups.Weird...