design id #19845158, Hope some feedback

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #19862280...#19862281...#19862282...#19862283...#19862284..

thanks..

Bonjour,

Pouvez vous me donner votre avis sur les propositions 19892515 et 19874823

Merci

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too .