Feedback please.

sir if you any changes

Hello, Project Owner.
Thank you for your invitation.
I just submitted my design.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible Comment on my design would be muchly appreciated.

Regards,
Symbolman.

Hi - I do not see it. Can you pot to the project?