Feedback please.

feedback please #20215541 and #20215543, regards

please check my new design

Please Feedback !(#20243244)(#20243243)(#20243242)(#20243241)

i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

If you want completely new one and if you have a sketch or thought ..please explain ?

Feedback Please. Thanks!