I have sent my designs. Feedback would be much appreciated!

Please, give feedback on my design. Thanks!

Hi, there:

Please clarify what the slogan is suppose to read precisely on the shirt. Your attached example says: '702 Raiders 510 at heart', the brief title says; 'Oak 510 4 LIfe from Oak to Sin City' and then further down in the brief notes you talk about using a graffiti typeface for 'Oakland' and a regular font for 'Las Vegas'. Can you please add the slogan, precisely as you would like it to appear on the shirt, into the brief?

Thank-you.

Yes . Sorry for the confusion.
I would like Las Vegas on top in black letters, with Vegas skyline on top. With “ Raiders “ or their symbol , below Las Vegas.
I would like Oakland in some real cool colorful graffiti, and below Oakland, I would like it to say “ at heart “
(Representing Las Vegas Raiders , Oakland at heart )

hi
sir do you want real photo of Oakland with graffiti effect ?
exemple
https://s.hdnux.com/photos/74/24/72/15814301/3/rawImage.jpg