Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

Hi,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Does this contest still exist?

what exactly you want can you re explain so we can try again from scratch ?