Dear Avi’s
Thank you for your designs.
The following are our request for changes. In general, these request for changes are our directions (you are free to design within these directions or guidelines) unless specify:
APPLICATION TO ALL THE FOUR PAGES:
1. Make the Word Board to be more transparent in all the pages (if possible). For example in page 1, The Word Board consists of the phrase “Pay-Per-Use” followed by the 3 icons beneath it and the phrase “FACTORY/WAREHOUSE/PRODUCTION SPACE” beneath the 3 icons. This word board in your design is orange in colour. Can you make the Word Board more transparent?
2. We need more variety of colours to be incorporated in the designs as the present design, in particular the pages below are too monotone (white). For example, can the infographic icons have more variety of colour? You can decide on the colours to be used. We just need more variety of colours specific and overall to be more dynamic.
3. Make ALL the infographic icons bigger (including those inside the word board). ALL the infographic icons are good and therefore deserve larger presentation

APPLICATION TO PAGE ONE
1. “Beacons Systems Technology Pte Ltd” to be of same font and size

APPLICATION TO ANOTHER PAGE:
For the Second Design, the Design that has the Globe on it, we’d like to make the following changes: -
1. The whole phrase “Subject to contract with Beacons” to be inside the orange colour box. All font size for this phrase to be the same.