feedback please #25384317 thanks

Hello...

Feedback on my design please...#25386000

Thanks...

Hi, please don't end the contest early. I have some designs I'm refining for submission.

Thanks, Max.

Hi, please check designs (#25416267) (#25416275) (#25416282) and all linked submissions. If you would like any changes made to any of my designs, please don't hesitate to let me know.

Kind regards, Max.

please check my new design

feedback pls