Hello there,

I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

Best.

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Best regards!
Marius