feedback please on design #27476503 and #27476504 , thanks

please provide feedback on my design #27481439 .

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Please check my design and let me know your feedback. Thanks :)
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Hello, i develop some ideas let me know what you think, thanks for your patience.
#27510645 design
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Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas