feedback please on design #28084895 and #28084896 , thanks

Hi all. Thank you so much for your beautiful designs. I am looking more for minimalist, sophisticated, classy. I am open to seeing some modern designs too. I do not like faces, etc in my logo. My colors are black, gold, pale pink, gold, and dark blue. I look forward to seeing other options. Thank you in advance for your hard work. I appreciate your talent!

Please check design #28102129 and give your feedback please. Thanks