Sir please check my design #28438082 and feedback please. Thank you.

hello sir,
please check my design, #28440175, #28440176.
thanks and regards.

Please check my design #28454928 and let me know, If need any more changes please advise me and don't hesitate to ask for a revision.
Thanks!

Just eliminated from 128 designs to 8. If I sent you a written message, that means you're one of the 8 designs still considering. Thanks!

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28472530 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)