feedback please on design #28819183 and #28819184 , regards

Hi, would love some feedback on my design here #28819425. Thanks

hi
provide feedback to this design ( #28819732, #28819733, #28819734, #28819735 )
also if you want any changes then feel free to tell me

( #28819732, #28819733, #28819734, #28819735 )
thanks

hello sir,
please check my design, #28820462, #28820463.
thanks and regards.

Hello Project Owner
Provide feedback to this design #28825029
If you want any changes then feel free to tell me.

Thanks,

Hey there! I would love for you to see my admission (#28823661)
and like to hear your thoughts about it!

Kind regards,

Thijs Felix

Would like to get your views on my concept.