feedback me on design 29316741 and 29316742 , thanks.

Sir, please check my design #29331139 and feedback, please. Thank you.

Hi,
Provide feedback to this design #29334016,
Also if you want any changes then feel free to tell me.

#29334016
Thanks

Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas