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Hi, I submitted an entry; please review the designs #30489685, and #30489614), and please provide direct feedback on my entry. I hope to hear you soon. Thank you!

Hello, I am developing a typestyle for you and am working on the icon that you gave requested. I have previously worked on the Strenesse logo while I worked in Germany at Peter Schmidt Group where I designed the packaging for Strenesse Gabriele Strehle's logo and first fragrance bottle and packaging. This is an interesting project thanks for posting.

Hey, thanks for your message. I'm looking forward to your designs. Sylvia

Hi Sylvia,
I am looking at two fonts that are in keeping with your aims and the Icons are going to be based on the NL and another option that might be better and communicate the brand ethos more.

Sounds interesting. If I would sum up NOLESS brand vision it would be: Combines luxury, casualness, and modern, minimalist designs in a feminine and self-confident way. Exclusive understatement Luxury doesn't have to be complicated or flashy. Timeless character: Essentials, Timeless can be worn for more than just one season

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Hello, Thank you very much for the drafts. I really like the first typeface (light version) and I think it could work very well. Regarding the icon, I'm not quite sure yet. It would be great if you could perhaps explain what you were trying to convey with it. What is the massage behind it? Thank you so much! Sylvia

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