feedback me on design 33288104 , thanks

Hello dear project owner,
Thank you for your invite I have made an entry with the i'd #33288582
please check out my design and provide your valuable feedback.

Kindly check my design.

Dear Please Check my designs
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/33294323
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/33294321
Both are different Design, So check them Both..
I hope you like them
Thank you

feedback please?