hello sir,please check my design id;#37290079 feedback please,Thank you

Hello, it would be nice if you could please check my design and share your valuable feedback.

Please check new submit #4115479

Hi!
Thank you for eliminating my previous designs!
It would be very beneficial for you as the contest holder, to share your thoughts, comments & suggestions on how I can improve my design for you so that you can maximise the value I may give towards this project and ultimately, resulting to a more synchronised, targeted and focused designs that will hopefully match your vision and tastes!
Jeff