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Submission ID: #37810547
Thank you for considering my design. I've focused on creating a distinctive RIR identity that keeps the strength of your brand while avoiding unnecessary detail. Please take a moment to read my pitch, as it explains why I believe this simpler direction will serve the brand better in real use.

Hey, I have submitted some designs that meet your need; please let me know if there are any adjustments you would like, and I will make them right away.

I'm awaiting your swift and positive response.

kind regards.

Hey, I have submitted some designs that meet your need; please let me know if there are any adjustments you would like, and I will make them right away.

I'm awaiting your swift and positive response.

kind regards.

feedback please!

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I like both your designs. How would you incorporate the tagline?