Any feedback on my designs yet ?

The picture of the kraken does not look very good to me. I am looking for somthing a lot more fierce and concrete. Yours does not look "pop out enough". And the words are not strong enough.

Please give me a feedback on my design!(is it appropriate for your message?)

I AM A 3D DESIGNER AS WELL AS ORNAMENTAL FISH HOBBIST FROM MUMBAI , INDIA I HAVE A PET SHOP AS WELL AS A ORNAMENTAL FISH FARM DO U HAVE ANY OPPORTUNITY TO WORK FOR YOUR ORGANIZATION
WAITING FOR UR REPLY