Hi, have you reviewed the updated version of my first proposal?

Yes much better. We still have a few days to go until end of project. Yours is still top of the bunch. One question, where you have the L that joins million and melanoma is possible to have it change from black in the melanoma to orange in million? Or at least change the orange L to black as we surveyed charity members and they thought melanoma looked like me anoma.

Regards Michael

Sure thing; I've submitted both requested versions for your review.