Sir ! please give feedback thankyou

Hello Carriage house.!

My name is Al from Xelx studios in Florida. I submitted a conceptual design for our awesome event pouring business in sunny California.

Hope you are happy with the designs sent to you so far. I see that you have 14 submissions to date.

Could you please send me some feed back on the Logo entry I sent to you for review.

There is still time to revise and or re-do it for you, and if you have not all ready found your Logo design. I am ready for the task. I am just getting started with this new business of my own, and I could use a little help, if you have time to spare.

I will draw in the light of the direction you send. How are these colors? And did I get close with this idea? Or should I find a new direction? Please advise.

Thanks for the chance, I would be happy to help with your image.

Good luck with your new adventures., and I hope to hear back from you either way .

Blessings.

Al