Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

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Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
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Hi there,
I have submitted your logo designs #22954274, #22954275, #22954276, #22954277
Please ratings the design But don,t give 2 star it will decrease my ranking.
Your positive Feed back matter me lot.
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Please advise if I am on the right track, I'm always ready to deliver you unlimited revisions until your satisfaction.
Thank you.