Hi, is there a way you can supply me with some creative feedback so I can see if I am on the right track? Thank You!

Hi, did another version for your review and was wondering if you could give me your thoughts? Thank You!

I'm looking it over. I think we're moving in the right direction. Not sure how I feel about the girl in this one, but the shot tray is the right direction. Also, I'm not loving the font, The overall circular shape is good but I need to look at it some more to give some more feedback.

Down Loaded a revised design for your review>. Thanks!