Feedback plz on my design #30218251

feedback, please!

Hello!

If you would please take a look at my design (DesId #30229200) and provide some feedback I'd appreciate it. If necessary, I'd be happy to work with you on any modifications to help you come up with a logo you'll be happy with. Thanks for your consideration and have a great day!

Hi, can you please provide me with some feedback on my logo design concepts? Thanks!